Saturday, July 21, 2007

prelude to a story

Some of you may have read this one before. Some of you are familiar with the author. I am giving this as a prelude to my next post. I'd love to dissect it for you. To walk you through every line and each word, but I wont. I leave it here for you to digest, and then, soon, I tell you a tale-- I'll weave you a blanket of emotion-- in the hopes that you will understand.

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please don't be too attached
please don't cry
saying good bye will be so hard

keep a good distance
keep your wits about you
remember nothing here is forever

we have had our time
we felt the breeze and the sun
I watched little things take your breath way
I am grateful we had this time

but things die
things end
and even that which exists through eternity
still changes

considered that the most solemn and faithful human love
is still fleeting
still just a feeling

so let me go
release my hand

and in your heart
know the scar to the right of what is good
and to the left of forever
is the remembrance of me

8 comments:

SIMON said...

I do know the author. It's moving and sad and if it's true for you it was so well chosen.
Thank you for sharing!

Bugwit said...

What a sad poem. It does sound familiar...anonymouse?

I have been informed that I have been neglecting you!

I'll try to watch that in the future!

Fuff said...

Bless you CM

Dan said...

The only thing certain is that nothing lasts forever.

Sling said...

That's very moving Mouse.
I'm looking forward to your tale!

Lorraine said...

(((Mouse)))

ginaemory said...

Oh Mouse...I am sure I know why you've posted this, and my heart is aching for you. Imagine me hugging you right this very minute, okay?

{{{{CM}}}}

Iwanski said...

Peace and prayers, friend.